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| Heading | Math | Basic mathematics | The class isn’t all math levels, but forms a basic foundation |
| Body | Foundational lessons to get started in Math | Build a strong foundation in math, from addition to percentages. | Adds more context about the subject matter. |
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| Heading | WAYS TO LEARN MORE | MORE LESSONS | |
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| Body | Additional resources made by the community to help you learn more. | Learn with lessons made by our community. | To me, it’s not “additional resources” but “lessons” |
| CTA | Community Library | N/A | N/A |
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| Heading | Course Details | Course Overview | Details implies specifics. This gives an overview. |
| Body | Oppia’s curated math foundations course teaches the basic building blocks of math, covering essential concepts like addition, multiplication and fractions. Once you have mastered these basic concepts, you can move onto more advanced lessons! Each topic builds on the previous one, so you can start from the beginning and complete the lessons from any skill level, or just dive right in if you need help on a particular topic. | This course teaches the basic building blocks of math. Each topic builds on the last, starting with simple topics, then progressing to more advanced lessons. Start at the beginning or dive into a specific topic! |
| Simple, less burdensome, and contains much of the original messaging. They don’t need specifics as to what is covered because all that is laid out as they scroll the page. |
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| Heading | Topics Covered | Remove | This is already apparent on the page |
| Body | Start from the basics with our first topic, Place Values. Or, pick a different topic below that you want to learn more about! | Remove | This is already apparent on the page |
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| Heading | Explore More Lessons Made by the Community | Explore more lessons | |
| Body | Search through our Community Library | Find lessons in our Community Library | |
| Search icon | Left search icon | Remove | Confuses users |
| Help text | What are you curious about? | What do you want to learn? | “Learn” is more actionable than “curious about” and ties more directly to the purpose of the platform |